oh...michelle is such a great original character! i love herm ;D

ah...the conversation with chris...so reassuring for both characters and readers. for some reason i'm picturing colin firth (as super barrister) coming to the rescue...too much bridget jones LOL...don't mind me, i'm weird.

the tension between matt and dom that you've created is really subtle yet it's undeniable. well done.

and i'm sorry matthew. you're not leaving anyone behind. i forbid it. ;)

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can't wait for more!