I am finally on this again after months of stalling, and why did I stall!? This is so bloody perfect!
It's the first time I started re-reading after actually seeing Sherlock, and this just climbed the scale on awesome. I can hear John's and Sherlock's voices now next to Matt's and Dom's when they are talking, I can see their movements and gestures crystal-clear and some jokes that went by me at first are having their brilliant full-blown impact on me right now.
Why is this not being lauded as it should be?? Everyone should be made aware of the geniality of Sherlock and Muse combined!
“Ah. Ah!” John exclaimed sarcastically. “Dominic flirts with the waitress so of course he's having sex with the male front man of his band. I'd believe it more if you told me it's because he sat like a woman. Which he did.”
Many passages made me laugh out loud, but this had me rolling on the floor, Oh John. :D
I can't believe how well you managed to capture their characters, this could clearly be an episode, Moffat should immediately hire you two! Your fantastic mind combined with Anya's excellent play with words is just a killer team.
Then there was distant laughter from the street followed by the screech of a car’s tyres. Cocking an ear, he looked away from the laptop screen, trying to identify all the different things he could hear, listening out for other sounds.
I can so well imagine Matt's famous paranoia. The way he shoved Dom's concern off, trying to act tough, and then indeed be all afraid of the dark. He's being exactly as stubborn as we imagine him to be, and the interactions between him and Dom are just so realistic.
“Broke, you idiot,” Sherlock hissed, getting gracefully to his knees and batting John's concerned hands away. “It's broke, not bwoke. Learn how to speak properly!”
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Date: 2012-02-11 08:11 pm (UTC)I am finally on this again after months of stalling, and why did I stall!? This is so bloody perfect!
It's the first time I started re-reading after actually seeing Sherlock, and this just climbed the scale on awesome. I can hear John's and Sherlock's voices now next to Matt's and Dom's when they are talking, I can see their movements and gestures crystal-clear and some jokes that went by me at first are having their brilliant full-blown impact on me right now.
Why is this not being lauded as it should be?? Everyone should be made aware of the geniality of Sherlock and Muse combined!
“Ah. Ah!” John exclaimed sarcastically. “Dominic flirts with the waitress so of course he's having sex with the male front man of his band. I'd believe it more if you told me it's because he sat like a woman. Which he did.”
Many passages made me laugh out loud, but this had me rolling on the floor, Oh John. :D
I can't believe how well you managed to capture their characters, this could clearly be an episode, Moffat should immediately hire you two! Your fantastic mind combined with Anya's excellent play with words is just a killer team.
Then there was distant laughter from the street followed by the screech of a car’s tyres. Cocking an ear, he looked away from the laptop screen, trying to identify all the different things he could hear, listening out for other sounds.
I can so well imagine Matt's famous paranoia. The way he shoved Dom's concern off, trying to act tough, and then indeed be all afraid of the dark. He's being exactly as stubborn as we imagine him to be, and the interactions between him and Dom are just so realistic.
“Broke, you idiot,” Sherlock hissed, getting gracefully to his knees and batting John's concerned hands away. “It's broke, not bwoke. Learn how to speak properly!”
Poor, poor Matt. Hahaha!
Next! :D
*huggles*